"From Autobiography to Memoir"
Helen Keller, excerpt from The Story of My Life— the water-pump scene
Laurie Lynn Drummond, "Alive"
E. B. White, "Once More to the Lake"
Tuesday: Scene Map, & Sensory Brainstorm worksheet, in class
Thursday: Second in-class writing.
Helen Keller
the turning-point model: the moment language breaks open for her.
Notice: the sensory build-up; the pivot in a single instant; change shown, not stated.
Laurie Lynn Drummond
personal history, place, and a hard turn, all in under 700 words.
Notice: how a single remembered moment carries the weight; or browse Brevity’s craft index for other “turn” essays.
E. B. White
a nostalgic sensory scene that turns on its chilling final line.
Notice: accumulation of detail; the sudden shift from nostalgia to mortality at the end.
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None. This is an in-class writing day.